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"Critics" is also used twice in that sentence maybe one could be replaced with "reviewers", though it's mostly unnecessary. "some critics found the music to be formulaic and stale, while others felt the music was." I think the second "the music" is unnecessary and would read smoother as "it".You could replace "used" with "employed". "The band members used new recording techniques, such as greater usage" double use of "used" / "usage".
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"revolve around dark subject matter" might be better as "matters" with an S or "around a dark subject matter" if it's a specific one.I see most album articles mention the record label in the lead.Might as well do this one, too, while the band's on my mind. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:The Black Market (Rise Against album)/GA1. AnomieBOT ⚡ 04:58, 24 July 2014 (UTC) GA Review GA toolbox I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. : Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= ( help) From Endgame (Rise Against album): "Endgame - Rise Against".From Billboard 200: Chart Beat Thursday: Eminem, Jason Derulo, Cyndi Lauper Billboard.I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article. I have found content for some of The Black Market (Rise Against album)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. Orphaned references in The Black Market (Rise Against album) 1 Orphaned references in The Black Market (Rise Against album).Albums Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums Template:WikiProject Albums Album articles If you would like to participate, visit the project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the discussion. This article is within the scope of WikiProject Albums, an attempt at building a useful resource on recordings from a variety of genres. This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale. This article has been rated as GA-Class on the project's quality scale. Punk music Wikipedia:WikiProject Punk music Template:WikiProject Punk music Punk music articles If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks. This article is within the scope of WikiProject Punk music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Punk rock on Wikipedia. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. If you can improve it further, please do so. The Black Market (Rise Against album) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria.